Yesterday my heart was pumping today the grade 6’s would walk to the all mighty breakwater it would be a easy walk I thought to my self… Well that was wrong, lets start from the beginning shall we! Yesterday the grade 6s were walking to the breakwater. We stopped maths early and loaded up with sunscreen, the teachers made our so called short meeting seem like it went for half hour but soon we were off walking to the break water! We took our nomarl route to the beach and then down to the surf club where the grade 5s stopped and walked the rest off the way to lake pertobe while the grade 6s walked on to the breakwater! At first sight of the wall Madi and I ran to the very front off the group. We kept walking to lakepertobe and when we got there we had lunch and a play. After we took a short cut and ended up at the railways in no time. Soon I was back at school and in writing!
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